Star Wars: Exodus

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Huh, I hadn't even thought of that. That's a good idea.

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Perfect example, I began a sentence with the word "aside" and the forum didn't like it.

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Omg, I just tested it out and it's not "aside" that's the problem. It's the combination of "aside from" and apparently only at the start of a sentence.

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Spent a good while debating how much Elena knows about how far the First Order has infiltrated the New Republic. Probably not much, but maybe it's reasonable to say she's at least had one experience. *shrug*

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Elena made a face at the mere suggestion. Other than a juvenile record she had from growing up on Vorzyd V the Republic had done nothing to help her in her entire life. Especially not in regards to the First Order. "Yea, right. Like those idiots would actually help," she blurted out withou...

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There was no response. After calling out to Elena a second time Bekka began to worry. She quickly hopped out of her chair and rushed back to the gunwell, nearly stumbling over herself as she climbed up the ladder in a hurry. Inside the gunwell she had found the girl lying on the floor. The hit the s...

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"She went this way," someone shouted as he ran down the hallway past three of his fellows. One of them reached out and grabbed him by the arm, stopping him abruptly. "No, you idiot, she's been spotted on the south side of the factory!" "South," a third asked, "Didn...

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Elena was already pretty nervous about this. She had no idea who this woman was or even what she was capable of. Even more so than that she was suspicious of why a complete stranger would put her life on the line for her. Against the First Order of all things. Most people she knew were too afraid to...

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There's an anti-spam bot on the forum that seems rather particular about certain things. Sometimes it takes issue with a single word in a sentence and I have to go back through and post what I've written piece by piece until I found the one word out of hundreds that it doesn't like. ><

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Lol, just gotta keep it going.

Should have a post up tonight, just trying to work out how I can make it longer cause at the moment it's super short. ><

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Isis found a comfortable spot to sit and watch as her two companions made their way to the outer gate. She was impressed by how skillfully Vague moved. He led the droid on a path that would keep them covered and out of sight. Isis nearly lost track of them twice which was quite the feat considering ...

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Elena stared at her a moment before she finally disengaged her lightsaber and lowered her arm. She continued to hold the hilt of her weapon in her hand, however, as she did not fully trust this woman. In her limited experience there weren't many who'd be willing to extend an olive branch to someone ...

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Nice.

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Elena frowned at the sight in front of her. Two full squads and a pair of TIE Fighters were patrolling the area around the spaceport. Does a fourteen-year-old girl really warrant this much attention? She ran her eyes over the entirety of the spaceport until she found her way in. A service entry, too...

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Ok, rewrites are done. Feel free to jump in at any time.

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Buuut maybe hold off for just a bit. Thread's under construction. I'm thinking I might take Gabriel out and focus more on Nova.

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Oh, well then join, you're totally welcome to.

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I don't follow. Was there a question?

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As the last bit of audio recording faded into the air, Micaiah could hear Isis swear under her breath. Damn it, they used me again, the hunter thought. This was the second time the New Republic Strategic Information Services had interfered with her career. Abusing her skill or her status for their o...

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IC thread here . This story is a prequel to Through the Never and takes place shortly after the destruction of Luke's Jedi temple, focusing on the four years before Nova's eventual meeting with Tsivoin and the rest. Don't really have a plan for this yet, just kind of making it up as I go and as alwa...

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The Ring of Kafrene was a failed mining colony that was converted into a deep-space trading outpost for desperate travelers crossing the Expansion Region. It was first created by the Galactic Republic before the rise of the Empire when it found itself under Imperial control. Nowadays it technically ...

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On the holographic display behind her a lone figure stepped out into the open. "Nice try, girlie," the man called out, his voice being picked up by the ship's external speakers. "Me and my boys here just want the kid. Send him out and we won't have to come in there and shoot every las...

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Micaiah had just managed to drag Tsivoin's unconscious body back onto the ship and when she went back to go check on Vague she found the hunter standing over his unconscious body with a blaster pointed at his head. "You kill him you don't get paid," she called down. Isis just shrugged. &qu...

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Isis stumbled to her left and nearly fell as a large chunk of the temple came crashing down next to her. This was stupid, she thought to herself as she continued trudging forward. Coming in here to try and save Tulsar was a bad idea, she knew it, the others knew it. That's why nobody else was in her...

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As they walked Rossi kept an eye out for the speeder and for Vague. She thought she caught a glimpse of it through the crowd but she couldn't be sure. Isis, meanwhile, had started to direct her away from where she parked. Even though she knew that Vague was close it seemed like she had no interest i...

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Kidiet Olgo was perhaps the seediest place Nova had found herself to date. As she and Rossi wandered the crowded marketplace her eyes were darting this way and that, taking in the various sights, sounds and smells that surrounded them. Vendors lining either side of the market were selling a variety ...

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A couple of days had passed. They were still in transit to--wherever EssJay was taking them. Vague was resting peacefully now and had yet to wake up from his operation. Most of the crew had huddled around the common area during downtime. Almost no one went into the cargo bay if they didn't need to. ...

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Nova was still finishing up bandaging the wound when Rossi spoke up. She glanced first at the Kessurian, then at Vague and finally at the readouts above his bed. She never had a formal education so of course she didn't know what any of it meant, but the little spiky line was still doing the beep thi...

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"Already on it," Nova answered over the comm. Then she half turned to Tsivoin standing beside her. "Just like lifting rocks, okay," she told him. "I'll get them over here you help me catch them." Tsivoin looked uncertain but nodded his head. Then Nova turned back to the...

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The blasterfire died down after the last stormtrooper fell. Nova stared down at her handiwork then glanced back up at Orev. The two of them together took care of the guard around the 'Bedlam and any FIrst Order officers still left inside. "Masilda's not here," Tsivoin announced as he came ...

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Nova didn't even really need Vague to look at Tsiv in order to tell who he was referring to. She could still feel his thoughts plain as day. She almost blurted out that Tsivoin is not a threat but she bit her tongue and held it in instead. She knew the young Zabrak was still having trouble dealing w...

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The outlaw glanced over at his shoulder for a moment, their current path of conversation bringing the need to act soon to the forefront of his thoughts. “Neat trick,” he started, motioning at his disabled arm with the good one. “How long does this last?” "Not very long," she told him with ...

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It was quite some time later when Vague was dragged back to his cell. Micaiah sat in the corner, her knees pulled up to her chest as she waited for him. When the door to the cell finally opened she practically jumped to her feet. Two stormtroopers brought Vague back into the cell, his feet dragging ...

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Micaiah shrugged. "Some kind of rapid response team," she answered. "I overheard some of the troopers say we tripped a listening post on our way in." Vague nodded. "Probably the ghost signal EssJay picked up." "Anyway, I don't think it's Nova they want," she c...

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Outside the temple Admiral Julian Vale waited patiently for a response. He periodically checked his chrono with an impassive look on his face. After about three minutes he turned to the officer standing next to him. "When the Jedi shows herself see to it that these two are brought to my ship im...

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Nova looked helplessly at Rossi. "Help me out here," she said, 'Do the math! The five of us against all of them! You know we can't beat them, but I can save everybody right now. It's what I'm supposed to do!" Rossi looked up from her cover and glanced over at Orev. “I’ve seen what she...

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Nova froze in place the moment Vague mentioned Tsivoin. "No, I thought he was with you," she said, "Where did he go?" “I don’t know,” Rossi replied as Orev and Vague looked her way. “We’d all stopped in this atrium with the fountain and next thing I knew he wasn’t here anymore.” ...

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"Set the ship down over here," she said, typing the coordinates into the nav computer. Vague briefly glanced at them then set his ship on a course straight towards the planet. It didn't take them long to find the ruins of the temple, Vague did a single pass over the charred structure befor...

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Nova glanced back over her shoulder at the retreating form of Tsivoin as she followed Vague back to the maintenance room. The warm, gentle smile that had become a near-constant since she woke up had faded completely. I'm sorry, Tsivoin, she thought to herself. All this time she'd been building him u...

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Nova felt elated when Tsivoin succeeded in his trial, but that elation soon faded as the boy grew overconfident. His taste of success went straight to his head and he immediately lost his focus. With a sigh, the girl glanced over at Rossi who a moment ago congratulated Tsivoin, but now the Kessurian...

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